ironleg:
Those are my initial thoughts, and honestly I still gestating on my plans for the game. Any and all suggestions, input, advice would be greatly appreciated.
Where in the character's personal timeline does the game begin?
The initial description suggests that they are already on a top-five superteam (although "would be" does have an interesting whiff of ambiguity).
However, I really liked the setup for your [other game] before it went into stasis during the health hiatus.
It could be interesting if this new game started with the characters getting their powers, and moved into the formation of the top-five superteam...
Another interesting question is setting. Any hope of a non-contemporary setting (whether past or future)?
Of course, you could cannibalize generous portions of your [other game's] world. That game had a very strong start, and your ideas there are worthy of seeing the light of day again. :)
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